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©2009 *Heavenwill
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Another space scene, trying lot of new techniques with sun, gas giant, comet... almost everything :)

Had much trouble with composition, one more time TT But I'm quite happy with the outcome

-Photoshop
-about 60 layers
-~7000*4000 originally
-and time and love :)

Critiques


:iconzakarranda:
The sun, comet, nebula, spacecraft, and distant planet all look good, cool, and fairly realistic.
The detail in the comet is very nice, I'm a big fan. The debris, the strands...
The nebulae in the background are cool, but all the horizontal strands spread out across the sky is kinda odd.
I enjoy the detail of the sunspot on the sun.

The gas giant could use a little more work; the bands, coloring, texture, and atmosphere. The edge of the giant is too crisp: it's a ball of gas, it oughtta be fuzzy. The grey/green bands and sort of odd 'etched' texture are neither realistic nor compelling. The general color of the giant doesn't quite match, but I may not be the best judge of that ;- )
Also, the engine trail of the middle spacecraft, when it overlaps with the giant, it looks more like a solid tube of green, than a trail of green.
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:iconmrekul:
Nice job with this one. Why so many layers?? Sorry, I'm really new to the digital stuff yet.

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Ya know, sometimes ya just gotta go for style points.
:iconheavenwill:
:) thanks !

Concerning the number of layers, I used a dozen for the comet, the sun consumed a lot too, and then, ships, stars, little and big planets...

That sure was a pain for my computer's RAM :)

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:iconbladewolf73:
this is really really cool... i like the way the comet worked, but if you are looking for critique id say that i didnt like the front of it... but the rest is awesome, the little fighter jet thingies are really good, and the planets look so realistic....

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donna mirai ga bokura wo tameshitatte kitto
:iconfactorxyz:
nice idea very nice work :D
:iconalltheoriginalnames:
Your artwork has been featured here [link] :D
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Collected in link below...

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"Isaac Asimov "
"Life is pleasant.
Death is peaceful.
It's the transition
that's troublesome"

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